Comments for Of Our Own Design

Comment on Note in a Bottle by engemi

engemi — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 20:21:33 +0000

What a beautiful poem. The form leads one to go slow, to really take the words to heart. Thank you

pdallen — Wed, 04 Jan 2012 14:50:43 +0000

Excellent. All tributaries lead to the ocean.

Rudolf — Wed, 04 Jan 2012 14:38:42 +0000

I ‘get this’, though my understanding of it may have lead me down a tributary from your own – I ‘get it’.

pdallen — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 16:01:15 +0000

Not subhuman. Dumbed down. And humanity is probably closer to enlightenment now than at any time previous.

varaprasadnvln — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 15:05:05 +0000

Day by day, rather minute by minute, you are rising to the level of Prophets, Mr. PD Allen.

“Look at the word
with Child’s eyes
and know the truth
is found within”

Ah! If ” Finding yourself” every would have become a sage or saint in this world.
We dwell among subhuman beings.

pdallen — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 14:39:28 +0000

Thank you.

Ivor Murrell — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 13:49:42 +0000

Clever poem structure and linkage imagery. Tight and complete in minimal words.

Bonnie Flach — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 20:23:33 +0000

hee hee true, otherwise he will end up in a Chinese restaurant as “Orange Duck” ! Yum!

Good poem!

Rudolf — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 14:48:47 +0000

Put a big smile on my face.

pdallen — Tue, 20 Dec 2011 17:53:57 +0000

You have a happy holiday as well.